The Hot Zone: Part Two

The details in this section were pretty gruesome to say the least... The whole description about the monkeys...let's just say, I'm just happy I wasn't reading it before I fell asleep. Even though the details are very vivid, it's what makes the story intriguing. Without the details, the story wouldn't be the same; it wouldn't have the same effect. The way it's written makes one wonder about what's going on and really think, 'something like this actually happens?' If there were no descriptive details, the story would just seem fluffy and boring. One thing that intrigued me, that I learned, was the change in the virus; the idea that the virus was given to the monkeys in the air makes me wonder what others twist could come from it. Will the people who breathe the virus die as well? If they die, will people know why, considering they didn't tell anyone they were breathing in the virus?